Immunity Challenge #1 Comments (Midsommar)

Judge #2:
I honestly had a hard time reading this one. Its was so wordy, but said nothing to me. I get no sense of direction at all. You have to make sure you have a concept that is going to make sense without an explanation.

Judge #7:
Originality: 7/10 - Honestly, when I read this, I thought it was going into the Donner-Party route, but it surprised me by going into the cult-route. I think I have seen a few movies with some of the general themes of this, but not all in one show.
Organization: 0/10 - This could've REALLY benefitted with some indentation, paragraph breaks, boldened words, italicized words, colored sections, photos to break up text, and different font sized words.
Hype: 6/10 - This seems like a show others would watch, but I wouldn't. I think I love the politics of the camp a whole lot more than the cult invasion-type story and I would watch for the camp more than the horror of the cult.
Plausibility: 10/10 - This absolutely sounds like a Netflix original.
Effort: 3/10 - There was a whole tribe working on this, but it really feels like only one person who was on a time crunch submitted this.

Wow! Let me find out who these judges are.